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s m e l l -

familiar, somewhat sweet
not uncommon.
unexpensive scents.
and everytime it rushes up
my nose with the passion
i grew to know so well
it reminds me of
   *pure.pleasure.
of burying my face in the
hollows of your shoulder blades,
of breathing in so hard between simultaneous grinds,
almost begging to suffocate.

s o u n d -

zips, fumbling with.
   - fum.ble. V. 1) to feel or grope about clumsily.
clothes thrown to the floor,
melodramatics being our fortes for forty minutes.
kissing noises: not a thought devoted to them in the chaos.
the creaks of the matress springs
we paused to complain about everytime
we stirred the bed back in to motion
like we'd never heard the sound before.

s i g h t -

i don't need to see your face
to get the butterflies.
and the tingles, intimidating,
occurring just below the belt.
and i'm lusting after every
skin cell,
fingertip,
cavern,
scar and freckle
that makes you so perfectly imperfect.
and remember the term
'love at first sight'?
and the way i brought meaning to the words
as if i had invented them.
and the first glance of your
body in it's unclothed glory.
and time slowed.
and you could almost hear
my jaw drop in the silence.
   *hopes.to.rewind.
you're gorgeous.

t a s t e -

your tongue always tasted better
than the others.
sweeter.
yours lingered in my mouth for endless days.
wouldn't let me be.
and you left me with a taste for fucking.
mouth watering for you.
my tongue was always wet.
   [among with many other erogenous zones.]
mine:yours.
and moist was never my favourite terminology,
and salt is an aquired taste
to one's mouth
but you make everything delectable,
seductive, desirable.
sweat drips, almost from the ceiling.
exposed.
the word taste loses all meaning.

t o u c h -

our life's vocation.
and between you and me
it's not going to get any better.
and between my thighs
carved beauty, from your pelvic niches.
i will tease your skin like
it is braille.
for i am blinded by the sensations that envelop me
when we become
a unit.




put your [f]ace to mine
and as if i'm [u]nder
anaestheti[c]
you will ma[k]e me believe
i a[m] in love.
seduce m[e].
experimental piece, exploring the five senses and sex.

writen october 11th, '06.
© 2006 - 2024 cuntflaps
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Surrogate-Failsafe's avatar
I like your style, but some of the lines (especially in the sight section of the poem) seem very awkward and cliched. However, I do think the taste section of the poem is very nicely done. I also like the [f][u] part at the end. You might want to try some more uncommon metaphors in the future, and if so, be less abstract in the visual department. It helps to use the entire poem as a metaphor rather than a vague sense of thought.